आज फिर एक बार जिन्दगी को,
बहुत करीब से देखा है ।
कितनी मासूम है, कितनी अनजान है,
जैसे बेजुबान है।
आज फिर एक बार जिन्दगी को,
करीब से देखा है ।।
ये तो जानती भी नही, कि अब कितना जिऊगी,
ना जाने कब मिट् जाऊं।
आज फिर एक बार जिन्दगी को,
करीब से देखा है।।
ये एहसास, ये जिंदगी का दर्द …..
मैंने आज , बहुत करीब से जाना है ।
जब अपनो ने , गैर होने का एहसास दिया ,
तब ये मासूम ,बिखर सी गई । तब फिर एक बार ,जिन्दगी को ,
बहुत करीब से देखा है।
आज फिर एक बार, जिन्दगी को।
बहुत करीब से देखा है ।।
-रितु
emotional line. really good
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Thanku so much rani
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Jab haath chodda apno ney, to gairon ko apna bantey dekha hai. Maine bhi zindagi ko bhot kareeb se dekha hai.
Truly amazing. 😄👍
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Thnx a tons #heartofsoul
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Heart to soul ** dear. 😊
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O yes. ….sorry
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Oh please. Don’t be. It’s okay. ☺️
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क्या बात है क्या बात है,,,,बहुत खूब….
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Thanku so much #dilkash shayari
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You’re most welcome G.
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😊
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Good..
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Thanku Arjun
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Beautiful words
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Thanx a tons ananya
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Beautifully penned !!
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Thnku so much jyo
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Amazing ritu…great work. Love to read more of you
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I’m glad and thanks full ….dt you read my post and like to. ..😊.
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What’s your name
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Saurabh
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Thnku saurabh
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Most wc ritu😊
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This is Spanish right
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gran contribución de ustedes, gracias por su visita y bienvenida.
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Thnx a tons Nilzeitung
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with pleasure!!!!!!!!!! (*L*)
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I don’t know Spanish as much
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,,,, great contribution from you, thank you for your visit and welcome.
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Yes I got it. ….muchas gracias Nilzeitung
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but this is great, I thank you (*L*)
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de nada😊
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😊are you welcome😊
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Yes I say your welcome
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they are very polite and nice about that Yes, I say warmly welcome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(*L*)
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,,,, great contribution from you, thank you for your visit and welcome.
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Bahut hi sundar likha hai ritu apne
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Jo dekhti hu jindgi me mehsoos krti hu bs usi ko likh deti hu …apko psnd aya ….iske liye apka bhut bhut sukriya
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Ji bas kuch aise hi khayalat mere bhi hai jo mai apni kavitaon me likhta rehta. Hope you would also like them
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I must read urs
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Do read “पहचान” “परित्यक्त” “दीपशिखा” “सफ़र” in my poem section they are my favourite among collection
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Beautiful. The way one keeps on. 🙂
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Thanx a lot ellie894
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Where are you from???😕
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From India
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Oh I see
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Nice to meet you Ritu 😊
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Me too😊
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Keep wtiring.. I Will like to read more from you 😊
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O my gudness. ….sure Ganesh
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My pleasure 😊
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Nice one ✌
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Thnku so much
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True words…you are nice observer 👍
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It such a big compliment Sir. ..for me. …thnx a tons. ..😊
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Welcome I am not ‘sir’… I am not that big kind of person.
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So krishnavatsalya is your name
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I am Ganesh and you?
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I’m Ritu
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Nice to meet you Ritu 😊
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Beautifully written!
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Thnku so much sandhya ji
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Awesome
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Thank you 😊
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Nice
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Thanku mahima
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Very emotional and positive. Heart touching at the same time. Let me suggesst you one thing… Pls try out a rhyme in your poems… that will give a lyrical touch. 🙂 All the very best.
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Thnku so much Di. ..I’ll improve it next tym😊
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Heart touching poetry…..that is full of emotions……
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Thnku mayra
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